Thursday, May 18, 2006

The dark secret

Through trees that rose to heights
The moon white as a dove
The sky watching with a million eyes
We played the game of love.

By the brook rippling down softly
On the earth that smelled fresh
Wrapped in your arms so closely
We nestled in our youth’s mesh.

Ah, the memory of one glorious night
It pricks the heart and it bleeds
And now, it’s your spite that I fight
No more in the ring of your needs.

The secret, I bury deep in the wood
The truth falling like sullen shadows
Here once hand in hand we stood
O’ the passion in me, still bellows.

You vow your love and steal my right
Never again to see your face
I remain the mistress for a night
A lover distant in time and space.


Parvati said...

"The truth falling like sullen shadows" - lovely poem, Anu. Keep them coming...

Anupama Viswanathan said...

Thank you, Parvati! :)

Ramya said...

Why am I such a poem-addict?? Am lost for words on this one ! Way too good! but am sure there's something better brewing..

Amrita said...

like i said before...get a copywright and start searching for a publisher...that was sublime and passionate..anu, u are really becoming a master!

Anupama Viswanathan said...

Ramya, Amrita, thank you for your kind words! :)

Known Stranger said...

wow.. preplexing your words are. made me dumb

karthik said...

Great...Beautiful piece of work....Story writing, poetry and now painting.. What's next?

Kumari said...

Beautiful verse.
I can't pick one fave line. I love them all :)

Anupama Viswanathan said...

Known Stranger, :( didn't understand?

Karthik, :D..thanks! What next? God Only Knows!

Hey Kumari, thanks! glad you liked it..:)

Harjee Kapur said...

Wish I could write like that... There are a million thoughts within that await a correct articulation... And after great efforts manage a few words...
But then I see a post like this and am humbled :-)


Vijay Ramamurthi said...


யாத்திரீகன் said...

Englibish-kum enakum romba dhooram.. didnt understand what was happening in the poem.. but few descriptions.. here and there was nice..

DD said...

Beautiful, Anu... Words vanish when I try to describe how I feel reading your poems! Just keep writing! :)

Anupama Viswanathan said...

Harjee Kapur, thank you and welcome here..:)

Vijay Ramamurthi, :), :?

Yaathrigan, hmm..Ok! but glad you liked whatever you found interesting..:)

DD dear, thanks a lot! :)